Beginning Audience Feedback

This is the beginning of our film. Bare in mind we plan on adding more titles at the beginning of it, and music has to be played to it.
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Good so far, edited well. Sound needs to be cut out at times and music needs to be put in where it needs to be.

More titles need to be on before credits(Going to be done anyway) And should stick with the theme of the title font. Nice idea of going to have a ticking noise with the title which extends onto the scene

Can clealry see influence from Hot Fuzz and Shaun of the Dead openings.